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  • Mood: Tired
  • Reading: Wired Love: A Romance of Dots and Dashes
  • Watching: Saiunkoku Monogatari: Second Series
  • Drinking: Water

I need someone who would be so kind as to give me a critique on my comic (or what I have done so far). I really want to improve my comic, especially from what it was five years ago. I need someone who can look at the characters, the story, the art, etc. and give me some helpful and thoughtful feedback. It really doesn’t matter if the feedback is positive or negative...I just want it to be helpful so I can improve. I would be very grateful if someone would take fifteen minutes out of their day to look at “Rebellion of the Commons” and offer a helpful comment. Thank you!

Here on dA: Rebellion of the Commons: Title Page by Greenpolarbear47

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Stop Harper Stamp by Greenpolarbear47 Bad Religion Stamp by KyoraSan We Need Love Too by KasaraWolf Conservation by soyrwoo RIP Mr. Layton by stuck-in-suburbia Canada Stamp by NoNamepje Endangered Animals Stamp by lemmingluv Help, please... by PixieRiot Fur is for animals stamp by sinuswave-art Do Something. by manticor save the polar bears by stampsbyjesper I hibernate by yarnluv NDP Stamp by acciosnitch STAMP: Real Men Are Kind by Mottenfest Art at 3 AM by blackdahlia Night owl by prosaix Night Owl Stamp + PLZ by Mirz123 The Life of a Night Owl by savagebinn Funny Pokemon Stamp by zafara1222 Useless knowledge by paramoreSUCKS Quoth The Raven Stamp by SailorSolar Leather vs. Fur by alaska-is-a-husky STAMP: Faux. Not Fur by Mottenfest Ravens Stamp by sequelle Oil Spill by dragon-sigma Traditional Art Stamp by darkartificer Revolution Towards Democracy by dragon-sigma Rise Against Fan by Dante3o3 Studio Ghibli Fan by Sharkfold teddy stamp by findyQ

Fun Facts about Me
1. I love politics! I often refer to it as my first love. I discovered environmental studies the following year and it turned out to be my true love but politics is forever in my heart.
2. I want to be Prime Minister one day.
3. I have an Honour BA in Environmental Governance.
4. I love animals. I have an interest in endangered and extinct species. My favourite animal is a polar bear and I have a soft spot for elephants.
5. I love animal print and feathers (and I liked them before they were cool).
6. I love foreign films, B movies, and classic films.
7. I’m a punk at heart.
8. My mom always says, that if I was born in the 70’s, I would have made a good hippy.
9. I am an environmentalist that could be described as an ecocentric, pessimistic sustainable developer.
10. My hero is Nicola Tesla.
11. My wardrobe is vegan (except for a few wool sweaters and a jacket) but I am not a vegetarian or a vegan.
12. My favourite author is H. G. Wells.
13. I live by this quote by Ralph Waldo Emerson: “The purpose of life is not to be happy. It is to be useful, to be honourable, to be compassionate, to have it make some difference that you have lived and lived well.”
14. I love chocolate and cheesecake.
15. If you want to know anything else about me just ask me! I don't bite!
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  • Mood: Tired
  • Reading: Wired Love: A Romance of Dots and Dashes
  • Watching: Saiunkoku Monogatari: Second Series
  • Drinking: Water

I need someone who would be so kind as to give me a critique on my comic (or what I have done so far). I really want to improve my comic, especially from what it was five years ago. I need someone who can look at the characters, the story, the art, etc. and give me some helpful and thoughtful feedback. It really doesn’t matter if the feedback is positive or negative...I just want it to be helpful so I can improve. I would be very grateful if someone would take fifteen minutes out of their day to look at “Rebellion of the Commons” and offer a helpful comment. Thank you!

Here on dA: Rebellion of the Commons: Title Page by Greenpolarbear47

Comicfury: rebellionofthecommons.the-comi…

Rebellion of the Commons: Chapter 1 - Page 3 by Greenpolarbear47
Rebellion of the Commons: Chapter 1 - Page 3
Pervious: fav.me/d8m9749
Next: (coming soon)

This is remake of my original comic, of the same name.

The comic is available every Friday here: rebellionofthecommons.webcomic… 

Feedback, positive or negative, would be a huge help. I want to learn improve and make this graphic novel a masterpiece that I can be more proud of than I already am.

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  • Mood: Artistic
  • Reading: Wired Love: A Romance of Dots and Dashes
  • Watching: Saiunkoku Monogatari: Second Series
  • Drinking: Water

So after some consideration, I have decided to release “Rebellion of the Commons” on DeviantArt as well. I will be releasing the pages on dA a few days after they have been released on the website. I have made this decision after I had a lack of feedback on comicfury. This is what I desire most.

 If anyone would like to read what I already have up and give me feedback, good or bad, on everything...art, characters, plot, dialogue, etc. It would be a huge help and you would earn my eternal thanks. A comment is much more useful than a fave!

Rebellion of the Commons: Title Page by Greenpolarbear47

"Rebellion of the Commons" will be available here: rebellionofthecommons.webcomic…

Rebellion of the Commons: Chapter 1 - Page 2 by Greenpolarbear47
Rebellion of the Commons: Chapter 1 - Page 2
Previous: fav.me/d8m96o8
Next: fav.me/d8n9fk3

This is remake of my original comic, of the same name.

The comic is available every Friday here: rebellionofthecommons.webcomic…

Feedback, positive or negative, would be a huge help. I want to learn improve and make this graphic novel a masterpiece that I can be more proud of than I already am.

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Rebellion of the Commons: Chapter 1 - Page 1 by Greenpolarbear47
Rebellion of the Commons: Chapter 1 - Page 1
Previous: fav.me/d8m969h
Next: fav.me/d8m9749

This is remake of my original comic, of the same name.

The comic is available every Friday here: rebellionofthecommons.webcomic…

Feedback, positive or negative, would be a huge help. I want to learn improve and make this graphic novel a masterpiece that I can be more proud of than I already am.

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saber360 Featured By Owner 1 day ago
Hi there :)
Listen, I know you've been busy with your comic, and that's cool, I understand and respect that and hope that it becomes the best comic it can be ^^
But even so, I've kinda been waiting for you to reply to me on our MLP RP for some time now ^^;
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saber360 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015
Uh, hi there.
how are you? < : )
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:icongreenpolarbear47:
Greenpolarbear47 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi! Sorry, I haven't replied. I went through a few days of depression due to problems at work but I'm back now.
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saber360 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015
Okay I hope everything is okay now :(
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Greenpolarbear47 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
It's an ongoing process!
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PuppieandPoley Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015   General Artist
thanks for the fav!
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:icongreenpolarbear47:
Greenpolarbear47 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! 
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saber360 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2015
Btw, I think I forgot to ask you this, but just out of curiosity, you DO have at least a decent amount of respect for MLP an EG characters, including the ones that supposedly have a fair amount of faults, right?
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Greenpolarbear47 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I have a respect for all the characters. Like most people, I like some characters more than others based on personal bias and whatnot but I think everyone does. However, like in life, characters have to gave faults or else they would be too perfect.
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saber360 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2015
Hey sorry, but what exactly did you graduate in?
I graduated in business management but I'm aiming to get into the animation business.
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